Name: Marty Edwards
Option: Product and Packaging
Issues Raised:
Not 100% clear what is happening, the writing on the video clip is not clear to read, i suppose you could adjust this before the hand in date.
Use of colour is mixed, some pastels some not? make it link as i dont understand it full, maybe this is displayed in the text in the movie but still not 100% clear.
Film starts of really well. You could use stop motion all the way through the video and the music to try and hold the pace and keep it interesting.
Why not try going for product and packaging
Actions to be Taken:
I will change the way that the video is done by making it all about me getting ready on a morning so its not as jumping
Try to make the text more clear so it is more clear whats happening during the movie.
Complete a CD package design so it can all link into the option of the brief which i choose.
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