This is the feedback i got form the crit, although i think its good feedback they picked up on the same mistakes which i did and i will adjust these accordingly to meet the brief.
FMP Progress Crit.
Problem Analysis - your concept is a bit random there are a lot of ideas but too much is going on. You should maybe try to focus on one theme rather than several in your final outcome and final solution.
Contextual Understanding - You choose a good and relevant method of delivery but the content is too random again, could this have been produced through a series of books to maybe have worked a little stronger. Apart from that problem i think a strong design choice and works nicely.
Research - Research is good, you can see you have researched a lot of primary stuff because of the context and also about the maps otherwise none of this would make any sense.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS - Could have focused more on budgeting, maybe done something more and played with the shock side of how much students spend to then make them realise what is happening.
My Thoughts
i am really happy with the feedback which i have received although i think there could have been more work created for what im wanting to achieve, i always want to try and achieve more so for the hand in i will create more work and see what is possible to be able to get done for it to try and boost my outcome and get the grades which i am wanting to bump myself up that little further.
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