Concept Crit 2 - With changes made.

Concept Crit

This time i made some changes to the work that im doing and then i am able to see how they go down with the other work which i have achieved, this is made from things such as defining what i want my target audience to be and how i then plan for things to look and work together as a collective group

Strengths 

Defined the target audience well. 

Colour palette is strong and shows a good range of colours that may be used.

Good type range.

Discovery channel would be a perfect channel for this project.

Techniques are something which will display your message powerfully. 

Area's For Improvement

Define your list of 10 things more 

Make sure my Tone of voice relates to my target audience  

Considerations

What are you going to include, this should be considered with your top 10 list

Create a "Title"

Food / Berries / Bugs you can eat ? 

Define "Wild"

Action Plan 

Create a statement of what im going to do, this should include... 

-Action plan 

-List

-Type of animation 

-Target audience 

-How would it look as print 

-Types of typeface

This was the secondary crit that i created for myself, this is something that i think will benefit from alot and this will make the most of things that i need to get done. There are still some things on this that i need to adjust but mostly they are complete and ready for the storyboards to go ahead and get created.