Feedback from Concept Crit 1

Concept Crit




This was a crit that could make or break the project, this was used to make the most of things and to pick up the problems that lay in and around the project itself. i think that i need to really check whats going on with the work that im doing and then how it can be changed to make the most of it. Below are some strengths and weaknesses that were giving to me so i know what i need to do and where i can improve if necessary! 




Strengths 


Defined the target audience well. 
Colour palette is strong and shows a good range of colours that may be used.
Good type range




Area's For Improvement


Define your list of 10 things more 
Make sure my Tone of voice relates to my target audience 
Technique or objects for the top 10 
The channel (channel 4 isn't maybe the best)




Considerations


What are you going to include, this should be considered with your top 10 list
Create a "Title"
Food / Berries / Bugs you can eat ? 
Define "Wild"




Action Plan 




Create a statement of what im going to do, this should include... 


-Action plan 
-List
-Type of animation 
-Target audience 
-How would it look as print 
-Types of typeface




After making this list. get a group of people together and get a small group crit going so that i am able to get another judgement on what i am doing and what i plan to do.