Feedback from group crit...

We had a crit today and this was the feedback which i got from it, i feel this has been most useful and has guided my development a lot more. 

The other sheet had water damage to it so i will type this one up instead...


Group 1
Marty Edwards


- Inconsistency with the scale of the logo 
- Context seems unclear
- How are they going to be presented?
- Boards to communicate the concept, give yourself direction 
- Range?


Group 2
Marty Edwards


- Are you producing a range of poster inserts or magazines?
- Cover? Content? Both?
- Boards to explain concept clearly 






Steps to take next
I will now go on to make sure that all of these criteria are met and that i make sure i can create enough work to get the best out of all of my work, i will create some large draft sheets to make sure that all of this is understood and how i want to best fit these problems