This was the final chance for us to get our work critted so that we were able to see what changes or what things didn't work when it came to working on the disk..
[the wifi was down so only our finals could be critted, this is the feedback i got on my finals which are on my disk]
[Feedback]
5 silent moves some simple concepts which could be elaborated on, the movement isn't that natural and most of them could speed up.
The 2nd brief is much stronger, obviously done some research into different techniques and grasped after effects more, some minor changes such as swapping the title and let the adventure begin, this would make this work better in my opinion.
Nice use of 3D layering / for the ice scene i would have made the ice move slowly and in one direction to make it look more natural other than that its a solid effort, 1st project didn't reflect your skills that the second one does but does show how you developed, great work.
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