Design for Print (Development 2)

Here i added more information into my design sheets and then decided to add a CMYK swatch to the corner to try and add some colour, the colour in the bottom right corner looks appauling and it will definatly be getting taken off due to it looking tacky and cheap and lowering the standard of my design.

However the layout isnt the worst so i will continue to develop this layout and try to aim for something syphsitcated and sleek which catches the attention of the viewer and allows me to acheive what im wanting.

I will post a Issuu version of this for the next post anyway so i have something for the interim crit tomorrow, but a changed and better designed final outcome will be created for the final deadline.