Tuesday, 1 November 2011

Feedback from the logo development




The logo that is created using the triangle and the text towards the top is the logo which got picked out by my "client group" as to have the most chances of becoming the best out of the ten which i selected. 

I then need to be able to work with this logo in a way which will help increase the style of how it looks and what i want to achieve from it.


To do this i needed some feedback from the critics and the piers who choose my logo. Below is the feedback in which they told me...

We enjoy the triangle effect as its reference to triathlon and the three events works well
Nice composition
Not sure about the relevance to running shoes in relation to triathlon, however it could be link easily through an range of things
Try to make it look more sporty
Change the triangle into a equilateral triangle so that it looks more even as the triathlon is
Try to add a visual reference to shoes in there. 


From these notes i will be able to create a logo which meets more the criteria of which i have created when i wrote down the nine phrases to start with. I will post my development once it has been created. 

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