This is the feedback from when we all swapped where we were sat with other groups and give what we thought where the strengths and what areas need improvement...
Strengths in my work...
Good use of shoe lace to represent the product / branding
Strong use of tints and colour, this has made the way that you look at the overall product differently, this is because of the way that you have used two colour's plus stock to keep the print cost down and then created a range from these
Good Craftmentship of the nets, they sit well together and don't feel flimsy and don't have any clumsy edges which have been cut badly
Stock Quality makes this more professional instead of standard A4 printer paper
Nice sub clue background pattern which strongly relates to the product
Area's for improvement...
Are you focusing on the "tri" or the "athlon" use the colour / font to show this.
More emphasis on the triangle shape, folds perhaps decrease the impact of the shape.
Explore the logo scale - would benefit from being oversized or shrunk in comparison to the overall packaging scale.
Explore position of the type in accordance to placement with logo and packaging
I will take all this information into consideration and then adjust accordingly.
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